Monument Soul

8) you got your ass kicked in class? damn... but that's all changed now because you can write condescending literauture about your enemies good luck with revenge!!! :twisted:

questions,questions,questions this is the best way to get answers about oneself and and the surrounding individuals what has life ever given me? what has life ver given you you? my ...

yet another perspective for me to inspect this is me looking in on a poem of looking without from within oneself being within ones "reqium" this is obviously the story ...

and emotionallybroken tale told from the body constructed of the fragments from broken perspectives these are indeed the dying moments of a number of individuals. it could only have been ...

I really liked this it rhymed and it told a good enough story however you left out way too much story who is chasing the two? why are the too ...

chilling and radiant such a beatiful theme it's so dangerous i'm so scared because I'm afraid it will happen to me there is someone I love that I had to ...

...hmm... I don't know about this one... poems were always meant to tell people things, and usually they always kept this mystique about their themes. your poem was very straight ...

this poem says alot yet says very little. (you can interpret that both in a good and bad way) you said something profoud but, you say enough...but to add more ...

:shock: oooooHHH interesting!!!! very interesting... creepy...a love of death and the dead alike I mean...I don't know what to say to something like THAT... that's just an okay thing...keep being ...

:? hmm....what? I read this work and didn't feel what you were trying to tell me. interesting settings...icky transitions...(the way I saw it at first) you state one by using ...

Foresight inspires insight does it not!? :) I don't know how or want to review you on stuff like grammar but can review you on what you're trying to say!!! ...

hmmm... well done krupp!! another lesson taught through poetry. imagery was a little off, but you got the point across. it reminds of a specific section in one of my ...

enchanting imagery,nothing more beautiful than a happy child...but I digress the structure is unique (as it should be) I like how you give away so much information on the characters ...

yeah, you tell em' God!!!! I really enjoyed this poem, because I could see where you were coming from and where you were going... the poem itself isn't an open ...

hmm I didn't know where you were taking me at first... but i guess I just needed to sit back and watch you go ...hmm it becomes unclear what you ...